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How to Choose the Perfect Middle Name for your Character

  • Writer: Charlotte Blandin
    Charlotte Blandin
  • Oct 10
  • 2 min read

Choosing a middle name for your character might seem like a small detail. Especially compared to choosing their first and last name, as well as building their backstory. But it can actually make a big difference to how your readers perceive their identity. A well-chosen middle name adds rhythm to a full name and can even hint at your character's heritage or some of their hidden traits.


Picture of it this way: the middle name is a “bridge” that ties the first and last name together. It doesn’t always get mentioned, but it shapes the way a character’s whole name feels when spoken out loud.



Here are some simple tips we found to help you choose the perfect middle name.


1. Balance the Flow

A middle name should flow smoothly between the first and last names. You can practice by saying the full name out loud several times. Does it sound natural in conversation? Does it have an easy rhythm, or does it feel clunky?

For example: Anna Rose Carter feels more balanced than Anna Genevieve Carter.

The key is harmony. The middle name should complement the first name, not fight with it.


2. Add Meaning or Symbolism

A middle name is perfect to add layers of meaning in a character's full name. Maybe it honours a family member or ties back to your character’s culture, or even reflects their personality.

For example, an innocent character full of hope with the middle name Lux (“light”) gains a subtle symbolic depth.


This is also a place you can include foreshadowing for attentive readers.


3. Don’t Overcomplicate It

Keep in mind that the middle name should support the first name, not overshadow it. If the first name is already unique or elaborate, consider a simpler middle name to balance it out. If the first name is short and common, the middle name can then be used to add flair.


4. Match the Setting and Genre

Just like first names, middle names should feel consistent with your story’s world. A medieval fantasy hero might carry a middle name that sounds ancient or noble, while a character in a modern romance might have a name that’s soft and familiar.


Fantasy example: Alaric Thorne Blackwood.

Contemporary example: Emma Jane Brooks.


The middle name can reinforce the atmosphere of your story.


5. Test Different Combinations

Try writing the full name in different contexts: on a birth certificate, shouted in anger, whispered in a love scene. Imagine how it feels when another character says it aloud. If the name fits naturally in every situation, you’ve likely found the right choice.


Conclusion

A middle name will usually not be used frequently in dialogues or descriptions, but it gives your character’s identity an extra layer of authenticity and depth. It can balance the sound of their full name, and sometimes carry hidden meaning. All of these elements together can help make your world feel more real to your readers.


Take your time experimenting with combinations until you find one that feels just right.


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